Koffie
tan , swirl
buzzing, talking, laughing,
creams, syrups, agitates, ice
Freezing, blending,
wet,translucent,
water
tan , swirl
buzzing, talking, laughing,
creams, syrups, agitates, ice
Freezing, blending,
wet,translucent,
water
Thursday, Sept. 11,2008
12 comments:
A very lively description there.
I liked it.
I love it! Summed it up perfectly.
That's the way my iced coffee ends up - bits of ice then water. Is that what you intended? I like the visual shaping of this verse.
Hmm yummy!
I can feel the froth coming up :)
Hi Lela,
Well, there's me Rose and Dewy Knickers and Bawdy Wench are alter egos of me. I'm a multiple personality within Brian who is a man and there are a total of six personalities including him and four other males. I'm the only female so I provide the common sense and intelligence. ;)
Rose
xo
i tried reading it backwards. and its still a great poem!
Thank-you most kindly for your words! I love what you've done with the spelling and multiple adjectives for the scribbling! Very creative and very fun! both your comment and your poem has brought a smile to the end of my (ugh) working day.
peace, life & love!
Namaste.
Vivid adjectives! And I love it when the written word makes a pleasing design on a page.
Is this a diamante? Seems like I've seen this form before.
Excellent job!
Sounds good to me! Nice poetry...
definitely talking :)
What is this form? It's on the tip of my tongue... it's a wonderful description. :)
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